In summary of my rough draft of my persuasive essay, the main focus is why former NFL and MBL Deion Sanders is the most accomplished American athlete to have ever played. My thesis statement is: " I believe among all of these great athletes former MLB outfielder and NFL cornerback nicknamed “Prime Time” Deion Sanders stands above all. Throughout his numerous achievements during his nine years in Major League Baseball (MLB) and fourteen years in the National Football League (NFL), Deion provides me with the position to claim he is the most successful American athlete of all time." This is a long and bold thesis statement but with information provided I believe my argument stands its ground. One of my main counter arguments is: " With the broad spectrum of highly accomplished and decorated athletes many have the ability to argue with my claim of who the most successful athlete might be." I believe this is a valid counter argument because many people have their own opinion of who the greatest athlete might be. My rebuttal paragraph is strong and keeps focus on the main idea and thesis of my essay.
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