Omitting needless words is an aspect of writing I struggle with. I find that I tend to write the way I speak, which leads to unwanted filler words. I find that in my writing filler words can also lead to run- on sentences and bad grammar. Normally these needless words go unnoticed, but in the case of writing a formal essay they are evident.
Choosing a suitable design and holding to it, is a positive trait of writing that I learned in High School. Having a good consensus of the topic along with an organized description or essay is something that was engraved in me through out English class in High School. A good thesis allows for a well written essay. Having a strong thesis sets up the writer to be able to refer back through out the essay.
During the revision process I can improve my writing by having multiple people edit my paper to help eliminate unwanted filler words. Reading my paper out loud has helped in the past of eliminating those words. For my next essay I hope to see an improvement in this aspect.
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